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(Fanfic) Not expected meeting

 

Title:  Not expected meeting

Claim: Shinn Asuka x Lunamaria Hawke
Genres: angst/drama/romance
Pairings: Shinn x Luna
Rating: T
Summary: “I have finally found you”
Comments and Constructive Criticism are welcomed

Disclaimer: I don’t own Mobile Suit Gundam SEED/DESTINY or any of its characters

Not expected meeting

 

She was wandering down the beach of the azure sea. The waves, that lost their power due to the meeting with the shore, were gently kissing her bare feet. The shoes were hanging down from the fingers of her left hand. A naughty night wind was playing with wet magenta hair. A dress, a little too light for such a cold night, tried to heat up her fragile body. Why did she choose to wear a dress anyway? 

 

She trailed her hand through still wet hair and carried the gaze of her blue eyes to the horizon line; behind which the first shy rays of the sun could be seen. The night passed by unnoticeably. She didn’t want to come back home, though there was no home any more. As well as there was no family left. The only place where she could feel herself needed was..this shore, each sand of which she managed to explore during these long years; this sea that has always shared its warmth and coldness, the rays of the sunset that reminded of  her inner self. Every time she comes here, all the problems went to the back ground of this sandy world.

 

She went down the shore slowly, enjoying its chilling laughter. For a moment, she closed her eyes and carefully embraced herself by the shoulders. It seemed that the wind itself was gently hugging her. The loneliness was good enough for her. She didn’t want anyone. Those things that she could feel inhaling the wet sea air, that feeling of freedom like flying above the ocean, nothing could be compared to that.  She could understand herself only being alone. Understand that she is…unbearably lonely. Sadness filled her still young, full of power to feel…to love, but already injured with the past and not healed with the present, heart. Only now she felt the coldness of the night that was making its way to the dawn smoothly.

 

She opened her eyes slowly. Her gaze fell on her bare feet. At this moment she felt someone’s presence. Immediately, without any other thought, she looked up and her eyes met so familiar yet so distant gaze of his ruby-like orbs. His lips whispered softly breaking the melody of the singing sea.

--I have finally found you…     

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Well, this one came to me while I was listening to the song “I totally miss you” by Bad Boys Blue. This is a wonderful song. I don’t know what about you guys but as far as I’m concerned, I feel butterflies in the stomach when listening to it. And the beta version was in Russian so I spent some time translating it into English.

 

So, the fic is quit angsty. More than that it has lots of grammatical and lexical mistakes, and I beg you guys, help me to improve my English V.V If you only knew how grateful I would be if you give me your helping hands.

 

Well, now what comes to this ficcie.

1)      I really don’t know why Luna is so upset with her life. Well, maybe she lost her home, her country, family and her beloved.. that she changed her place of living and went abroad.

2)      I wanted to show that she is really needed like a girl, a beloved woman. So ‘the hero’ is Shinn.

3)      Why Shinn?? Because I love Shinn/Luna pairing, and here I wanted to show that Shinn could be caring. He is! We all know it. And besides, their relations are so unsteady V.V They surely need more time to spend together  (Oh, yeah. If anyone of you knows where I can find good fics on Shinn/Luna tell me, please *.*).

4)      Listening to music is a good thing!! ^^

Hope to receive your reviews!!

From Russia with love!! (Joking…I’m from Belarus) 

 

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